Thought id like to offer my thoughts on your shots of this particular model , as starting out i certainly wished someone did it for me......I hope you havnt got a sensitve nature but i do tend to speak my mind and I only say this for your advantage.....
These are simply my views on the shots you have taken.....
Firstly , Id never use Red text as your copyright, it doesnt mix with your photo ,( no mater which photo your are working on) and as im sure you will agree red is a distracting colour so no point in makeing the user see your copyright when really they shud concentrate on your work.
2 , I always belive in trying to make sure the Background compliments the foreground , in this case the model being in the foreground of this shot. She is wearing Black with bright Blonde hair, and for me that just doesnt work , i would ask the model to wear more Autum colours, dark and Light browns , Dark and Light reds , dark greens..etc...etc.... this will then help add to the shot its self and make it more professional and tell the person looking at the shot that you paid attention to the details , belive me , when you do that it makes all the differance.
3, The Model is good looking , thats a given and i wouldnt be surprised if you get comments to that effect, but think about this , are their comments about her? ( remember She is Blond, Good Looking) or is it about your work as a whole? I belive you need to make sure that your work is not simple Glamour/Softcore Porn as every Human on the planet will always like that , but rather something Beautifull. Beautifull Work Vs Glamour which would you rather have in your port??